Chapter 1, Page 25: A Little Basil
EDIT: Went and changed the pink-haired lady’s name to “Cerise” because I wasn’t feeling the “Felicity” name for some reason. XP
Devere’s better with soup than tea, I guess.
A couple of things:
Devere has pockmarks on his face as of the last couple of pages (depicted with small lines & dots, though it’s kinda hard to not make it look like stubble). I think I’ll be keeping them as a detail on him because I keep adding them in. Not very obvious here but I’m hoping they suit him and don’t come off as just distracting lines. I also kinda like the idea of him having seriously bad skin troubles as he grew, for more than one reason. And yeah this only means I’ll have to go back and edit comic pages and any important art sometime. NO PROBLEM RIGHT?? XP
Also when I was working on Daniel, I used a font size of 10pts for the dialogue, but bumped it up to 10.3 for Knell and Devil’s Trill. Now, starting with this page, I went back down to 10. Might be slightly harder to read on phones but my text was taking up way too much panel space. I don’t remember having that issue as much with Daniel, so I thought I’d try this size again, but if I still have problems, it may go a tad smaller still.
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